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| - | Y'lair released the transporter controls and quickly placed an outspread hand over the left side of the immobile John Carter from the USS Republic universe. | + | Y'lair released the transporter controls and quickly placed an outspread hand over the left side of the face of the immobile John Carter from the USS Republic universe. |
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| In the meantime, Saal reported back to Theo on the flight deck. | In the meantime, Saal reported back to Theo on the flight deck. | ||
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| - | In the first few front rows, familiar couples sat in observance of the ceremony. | + | In the first few front rows, familiar couples sat in observance of the ceremony. |
| The ceremony had reached it's apex, as cultural etiquette was met, and the admiral finished her sermon after reading from a leather-bound copy of the Articles of Confederation laid open on the podium in front of her. | The ceremony had reached it's apex, as cultural etiquette was met, and the admiral finished her sermon after reading from a leather-bound copy of the Articles of Confederation laid open on the podium in front of her. | ||