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--- current_story:re-emergence_part_2 [2024/11/17 19:04] – cromwell
+++ current_story:re-emergence_part_2 [2024/11/28 19:51] (current) – cromwell
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 Kostya now realized why Jameson couldn't erase the computer: Shannon was in control, and she was protecting something in the computer she did want him to see.  Looking back and forth between the Shannon and the dizzying array of holographic optical files on his screen, his eyes widened as he made yet another connection.
-“Did you do this,” Kostya implicated her, pointing to the random flashes of holographic code on the screen beside him. “You transferred these patterns from the transporter buffer.”
+“YOU did this,” Kostya implicated her, pointing to the random flashes of holographic code on the screen beside him. “You transferred these patterns from the transporter buffer.”
 Shannon didn't respond.  She only stood with a defiant look on her face, signifying the affirmative.
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 “What did you DO?” he asked with intensity in his eyes.  “What did you DO to them?”
-“Their bodies were dying and the stasis chambers were offline,” she explained. “I made room for their patterns sickbay's medical computer by erasing the EMH Mark One and uploaded the neural engrams from as many crew as I could through the medical transporter buffer."
+“Their bodies were dying and the stasis chambers in sickbay were offline,” she explained. “I made room in the sickbay's medical computer by erasing the EMH Mark One and uploaded the patterns and neural engrams from as many crew as I could through the medical transporter buffer."
 “You WHAT?” the vice admiral recoiled in disgust. “Why??”
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 The master chief continued typing commands into the console when, without warning, a female voice beckoned him from the computer speakers.  It was very apparent that it was a pre-recorded message, but the changeover in prefix ciphers seemed to have triggered it.
-=/\= //"...Ted... I knew you'd find me, my darling.  I'm sorry I couldn't be there in person to greet you, but if you're receiving this message, I lost my life aboard Saratoga to one of Admiral Kostya's interdiction orders.  I've left information vital to the survival of Interdiction Order 1224 in the memory circuits of the Saratoga's backup core..."// =/\=
+=/\= //"...Ted... I knew you'd find me, my darling.  I'm sorry I couldn't be there in person to greet you, but if you're receiving this message, I lost my life aboard Saratoga to one of Admiral Kostya's interdiction orders.  I've left information vital to the survival of Project Proteus in the memory circuits of the Saratoga's backup core..."// =/\=

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