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--- current_story:these_are_the_times_part_1 [2023/01/08 03:10] – cromwell
+++ current_story:these_are_the_times_part_1 [2023/01/29 00:43] – cromwell
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 It was nighttime, and the rain was coming down in sheets, soaking Leon's black tactical jumpsuit as he lay face down in the mud.
-Leon fished his phasor rifle out of the puddle in front of him as the squad of troopers ran past him, their boots splashing water in his face with each step.
+Leon fished his phasor rifle out of the puddle in front of him as the squad of troopers ran past, their boots splashing water in his face with each step.
 "C'mon, Cromwell!  You're putting us behind schedule!" echoed the angry Texan voice as it moved away from him with the troopers.  "That looks VERY bad on my report!"
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 "Cromwell here, lieutenant," the doctor tapped his combadge.  "Go ahead."
-=/\= //"Commander Hendrix needs you geared up and in transporter room two in five minutes."// =/\=
+=/\= //"Commander Hendrix needs you geared up and in transporter room three in five minutes."// =/\=
 "Acknowledged."
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 "He hasn't got hours!"
-//(to be continued)//
+//([[current_story:these_are_the_times_part_2|to be continued]])//
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