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--- current_story:these_are_the_times_part_1 [2023/01/08 00:57] – cromwell
+++ current_story:these_are_the_times_part_1 [2023/01/08 03:06] – cromwell
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 "Leon, why are you doing this?" Pakita addressed the eight-hundred pound Mugato in the room.  "Why are you bothering to work with Roth-Dorian and Hendrix?  Even Hawk doesn't trust them."
-With an exasperated sigh, the doctors let his head fall back into the headrest of his chair.
+With an exasperated sigh, the doctor let his head fall back into the headrest of his chair.
-"I TOLD you Maria, I'm not doing this for myself," Leon looked at her with irritation.  "I want to bring my dad home... I'm doing it for HIM."
+"I TOLD you Maria, I'm not doing this for MYSELF," Leon looked at her with irritation.  "I want to bring my dad home... I'm doing it for HIM."
 "At some point," warned the Republic's ACE soberly.  "They're going to betray you.  Trust me... It WILL happen..."
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 As the door slid shut, Leon stretched his aching muscles to get himself out of his chair with intensions to head to sickbay and help with battle preparations.  Unfortunately, fate had other plans for him.
-=/\= //"Ragnar to Cromwell."// =/\= the comm system beeped to life.
+=/\= //"Ragnar to Cromwell"// =/\= the comm system beeped to life.
 "Cromwell here, lieutenant," the doctor tapped his combadge.  "Go ahead."

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